Thursday, December 29, 2011

Meet The Bradburry's




MEET THE BRADBURRYS

Meet Eric Bradburry, teenage heart throb of Sunset Valley, or at least he see's it that way. Eric is your average teenage boy , he plays sports , he likes girls, he likes girls , and most importantly he likes girls.
Eric is the first son of Dr. Matt and Helen Bradburry, both of which are from Sunset Valley. 
Eric just entered his senior year and is more now than ever constantly catching the eyes of teenage girls , all but one Aubrey Walgren. Aubrey , for the most part is your typical teenage girl , except in her case she rather read books and do homework than dream about boys, and for some odd reason she's caught the eye of Eric Bradburry.

*sighs*


Huuuh. I just can't seem to get it right. I need to grab her attention without really grabbing her attention. I need to decretely stand out.
Arrg. This is stupid. Why am I so hung up on this, this geek??

Maybe I should ask for help with homework! Naah too obvious. Maybe I should call and ask. "Hey this is Eric from school -- you know the guy you didnt give your number too and is creepishly calling you" , nahhh not gonna work either. This stuff ususally comes natural , love letter it is , my delivery has to be classic

"Deearrr --"
Naah too formal
"To Aubre--"
Naah too relaxed
I got it I'll just start writting whatever comes to mind


The next morning on his way to school Eric couldnt help but to think about her. It was obvious to even the  most niaeve mind on the planet. He thought of her walk, smile, scent  and what he imagined to be the sound of her voice.



Princeton: What you thinking about Eric?

Eric: Nothing much kiddo, just ready to get the school day over with.

Princeton: You seem ... tense, kinda like your nervous. You fail another test?

Eric: Ha ha ha very funny, and no I didnt fail any test. Im fine, really buddy, its grown up stuff kid, your far too young to understand.

Princeton: Pah ha ha "GROWN UP" . Yea, sure. Im smarter than you think. Its a girl isn't it. It's written all over your face.


Upon walking into the school Eric rushed to Aubrey's locker with hopes that no one would be around. 1 or 2 "nobodies" stood around the chemistry lab , so he slid it into her locker and rushed back down the stairs hoping nobody seen. 

After taking his seat in the classroom Eric immediately felt his palms begin to sweat . He began to immediately wonder if he had made a huge mistake. Maybe he should have waited. Did she even see it? Maybe it fell while she opened her locker , these were just a few of the many thoughts racing through his head.  


Alvin: Hey man , did u catch the game last night?

Eric: Nope. I was a little caught up , trying to devise a plan to ask --- Nevermind you call Diggy? I want to  do a band rehearsal before the Homecoming Show, it has to be epic! I put together some sick drum and bass solos, guaranteed to get the whole senior class pumped.

Alvin did indeed notice how Eric didnt finish his thought and immediately jumped to another subject. Alvin and Eric had been best friends as long as they could remember. They grew up in the same neighborhood and their families grew closer as they grew older. Alvin knew something was up , he knew Eric like the back of his hand.


 Alvin: Yea he said something about tunning his guitar , not sure what he's getting at but lets count him out. We can rehearse just like it's just going to be us if he shows he shows if not oh well.

Eric: Sounds good to me.

Alvin: Oh yea so whats were you saying? You were trying to do what exactly??

Eric: Nothing just forget that man.

Alvin: Its a girl isn't it... is it A---

At that very moment Erics heart dropped, if he said Aubrey Walgren that means the note possibly got into the wrong hands.

Alvin: ....Amy Lewis! She's totally into you man.

Eric: Amy Lewis? Ha ha ha ha haaaaaa AMY LEWIS!!

Eric laughed with relief histarically.

Alvin: Yea man, why is that so funny to you? She's wayy into you, AND she's hot. I'd be more than happy to take her off your hand my good friend.




...BUT WHY ME?

Despite the stress that Eric brought upon himself everything worked itself out... at least that how it seemed. He had an extra problem, Amy Lewis. Apparently Alvin put in his 2 cents to get them together, well more like a dollar, because she showed up at his home.

 Later that evening Aubrey invited Eric out to hang out and get to know each other.
Aubrey: Sooo, the infamous Eric Bradburry your the last person I thought I'd be here with.

Eric: Well, there's a first for everything right?

Aubrey:  True, but you, your a total jerk ---ha I mean--- no harm intended --- but yea your a pretty big jerk.

Eric: OUCH! Ha ha ha , no harm taken , but you seem like a smart girl ---

Aubrey: That I am

Eric: So you admitt its not good to judge a book by its cover.

Aubrey: Ok maybe I shouldn't have judged you completely , but for the most part I'm going off cold hard facts here , ha ha.

Eric : Sense of humor. I like.



 Eric and Aubrey had alot more in common than they thought.

Aubrey: So there's more in that massive head of yours after all, he he he.

Eric: Ha ha , funny , I'm smarter than what most people think.

Aubrey: So is that why you do the things you do ... people?

Eric: Im sorry I dont get exactly what you mean.

Aubrey: Well I saw you at my locker. You went when no one was around except those two sophmores, you discretely slipped that note into my locker because you were afraid of "people", not me.

Eric: Uhhh I honestly can't answer that, you know I am human , as an emotional being its deeper than that. We fear the unknown , and your reaction was unknown.


"Chocolate covered candy kisses
They keep me reminiscing
All I want is what your giving
Nothing like your affection
So in love and you're the reason
There's no more lonely season
Make me love you, drive me crazy
Think I wanna be your lady"

                                           
                        SO THEY BEGAN TO DATE




Eric: Crap babe, I dropped your promise ring.

Aubrey: *sighs* not to my surprise, it's always something Eric.

Eric: Relax I'll find it in a sec' babe.

   
  Aubrey: I can't believe you

Eric: Relaaaax your over exaggerating. I'll replace it in no time

Aubrey: It's not about replacing it Eric...just forget it ok ... really.








































2 comments:

  1. Looks good so far :) can't wait to see what happens next.

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  2. thanks alot its my first one ever so im verrry nervous!!

    THANKS A MILLION

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